Insanities of A Misunderstood Mind

Rising Star

I enjoyed your body

And you loved mine

Thought you were for all time

But there's been a change in design

Happiness changed to pain

Where there was only sunshine

You brought the rain

My question is my soul

What did you gain?

I swear it's like you tried

To drive me insane

One of these days

You'll wish you still wore my ring

When I finish what I started

You gonna see what I mean.

© Copyright 2006 D.B. Rudd

Peace I'm Out In Space

The Illicist

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• #3 Comment from scotthlori 
  9/3/06 11:32 AM | Permalink

  I read my own comment and realize what I said came out wrong.  I didn't mean I couldn't understand your poems, I meant I when through a period where I read from the classic poets and it was way over my head!  LOL
  
  Keep on writing ...  :o)
  
  LORI
• #2 Comment from scotthlori 
  9/3/06 11:30 AM | Permalink

  I'm enjoying reading your poems.  I tried to be "a poet" once ... it last about 3 mintues, when I realized I SUCKED!! LOL  Besides sometimes I have a hard time understand some of it.  I stick with lyrics now ... and songwriting.  HEHE!
  
  Have a good one!
  
  LORI
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• #1 Comment from am4039 
  8/30/06 7:48 AM | Permalink

  like that a lot.
  
  http://journals.aol.com/am4039/life/