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Monday, March 24, 2008
Subject: Moved!
Time: 8:41:55 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Hello, this is Ylanne Sorrows (Lea Stone) writing to inform you that most of my writing and internet activity have moved to Gather.com. You may join to post comments and rate articles, images, and video; join and create gather groups; and meet and connect with amazing people using this link: http://www.gather.com/inviteLanding.jsp?parentMemberId=434297&tc=14

My homepage is at http://trealistorm.gather.com
Fugitives From Ignorance, Conformity, and Peer Pressure/FICPP http://fugitive.gather.com
Crime Writers Writing Hole/CWWH http://crimewritinghole.gather.com
AND
Uniquely ID'd as the Perfect Fit http://uniquelyidd.gather.com


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Tuesday, December 11, 2007
Subject: Poetry Contest
Time: 8:07:08 PM EST
Author:  trealistorm


I am entering the Gival Press 9th Annual Poetry contest. The title of my manuscript is "The Dreamer's Song", and the vast majority of the poetry deals with dreams, or dreamlike states, or dreamlike events.


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Thursday, October 25, 2007
Subject: Same as below but with addendum
Time: 9:34:27 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Good versus evil. Surely, everyone has heard that phrase now; it is so common as to have become nearly cliché. Nevertheless, as a people, we have always been fascinated with the concept of good and evil. God and the Devil. Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker. America and the Terrorists. I am sure you can field several of your own examples of this concept in literature, movies, comics, and even in international politics. This classic discussion has its roots in the eve of humanity. With people, come good and evil.

I am sure many of you can recall playing Cowboys and Indians or War or Cops and Robbers, or something equally dramatic and appealing. Let me guess, the Indians were the badguys, and so were the robbers. When you were younger, did you write superhero comics? Was there an all powerful hero or heroine who was called to save the world? And no doubt, there was an equally nefarious villain, someone so evil and frightening you had nightmares. Did you ever write a fantasy story? A hero or heroine who needed to bring peace and justice to an otherwise dark and lost world? And there was an evil wizard, or an evil king, or anyone who could be called 'evil', right?

From our very conception, we have been confounded with the mystery of good and evil. Somehow, the good always wins and the evil is always punished with everlasting damnation or some sort of satisfactory punishment. Do you read the news? Do you read about terrorism? Whom in history might you name as an evil person? Might you say King Henry VIII, Adolf Hitler, Pol Pot, Osama bin Laden, Saddam Hussein, the biblical Pharaoh who ordered all Hebrew babies killed? When you think of these people, do you imagine sadistic psychopaths with hearts as black as coal? Do you label these people evil human beings?

What if someone told you otherwise? What would you say to them? Would you laugh and say "You're joking, right?" and wait for them to confirm your first reaction? Well, ladies and gentleman, I am that person. I am saying to you that none of those people, not one of the supposedly evil criminals and terrorists in the world is an evil person. And I am not joking, contrary to your first impressions. By now, perhaps you are scratching your head, looking sideways at your computer screen and saying "What?!" Or maybe you are more militant in your opposition, leaping from your chair and stabbing a finger towards the screen screaming in a hoarse voice "Liar!!! YOU'RE JUST ONE OF THEM YOU *expletive*!!!" or some variation on that concept. But nevertheless, I say to you that there is no such thing as an evil person. Likewise, there is no such thing as a good person.

Now, surely, you are beleaguered and truly wondering if I am high right now, or just plain insane. I assure you I am not. But what I say is true. You may disagree with me all you like, but nothing can change truth. You can say the Holocaust never happened, but it will not change the facts. You can believe what you say and it still cannot change the truth.

I am not saying-and never said-that there is no such thing as an evil action, or an evil thought. Genocide is evil. Hitler committed an atrocity, an evil act. He most certainly had evil thoughts in his mind, and maybe he even believed them. The Pharaoh who ordered the Hebrew babies killed most certainly committed a criminal act-what he did was evil. This in itself, however, does not make him evil. Evil actions and evil thoughts cannot make someone evil, just as a good action, such as donating a few pennies to charity, cannot make a person a good person. Why, if it did, then everyone on earth surely would be a truly good person! Of course, that statement is ridiculous, and so too is the assumption that a murder, or a lie, or a theft, or an act of cheating can make someone evil.

You might say so, or think so, but when you really think about it, it is ludicrous. Writers, when you write, do you make your 'badguys' evil, treacherous, and cruel? Maybe deformed or bad-looking? Do you make your 'goodguys' heroic, honest, and virtuous? Maybe attractive and good-looking? Stereotypes, archetypes, biases, prejudices, all of them. And you have probably read more than one book that does exactly this. Make the protagonist utterly desirable and the antagonist utterly repulsive.

Ever heard the expression "Don't judge a person until you walk a mile in their shoes?" Well it’s true-only I amend it to say “Don’t judge a person until you’ve not only walked a mile in their shoes, but worn their clothing, done their job, and loved the people they loved.” In other words, there is no way you can accurately make a judgment-or fairly, I should say-of any person until you know what their life is like. Their background, their history, their family life, their home life, their future plans. You need to know a person before you can judge them.

Hold up, before you say “But I don’t have to know Hitler to know he’s evil!” or something to that effect, remember what I told you before. There is no such thing as a truly evil person. The only evil entity is the Devil or Satan if you will. And likewise, the only good entity is God, Allah, Elohim, Jehovah, or whatever you want to call Him. The only reason people have evil thoughts and do evil actions is because of Satan.

Now if you believed that because a man commits murder, he is an evil person, then think of all the times you tell little lies to get out of an assignment, or white lies to avoid confrontation, or to protect your friends. Think of all the times you have ever cheated on anything, or shoplifted anything. Those are bad, or evil, actions. So does doing them automatically turn you into an evil person? If you believe that murder makes the murderer an evil person, then yes. Obviously, this cannot be the case. It is not different. Murder is not more serious than lying. Both are bad, both are evil, and both are sins. Both are inherently evil actions that cannot possibly be good. But does doing make you a bad person?

Imagine Hitler, for a moment, if you will. Hitler killed over six million Jews, Gypsies, homosexuals, mentally ill people, and disabled people, as well as political opponents during his tenure as Die Fuhrer. Of course, these were very evil actions. Imagine for a moment, that you are Hitler and you are still alive. Do you feel sorry for what you have done? Maybe Hitler did, and maybe he did not. Most if not all of you probably believe that there is no way in heaven or hell that Hitler was remorseful, and you are probably right. Do you think it is because Hitler is an evil person? I say that maybe Hitler felt he was doing the right thing. Did you ever think of that? Maybe Hitler did not see his acts as evil. Most of us if not all of us, do. But maybe he did not.

We are intrinsically inclined towards doing evil actions. It is human nature, as it has been ever since Eve betook of that piece of fruit-which we do not actually know was an apple, contrary to popular belief. We were created to be good people, without blemish and perfect, living in harmony with our creator. But we spoiled things, as we often do. (Think of the ideal of Communism, or of having the greenhouse effect, which is turning into Global warming) We have a peculiar talent for killing each other and ruining good things. And so we are no longer good people, but we are also not evil people.

I am a person just as you are. I have made mistakes and I have my own downfalls and weaknesses. I do not claim to be wholly innocent. But I do believe in truth, and that is all that I present here. So good versus evil turns into person versus person.

 Lisa Montgomery is not an evil person. What she did was wrong, but it doesn't make her evil, and it certainly does not make her family evil. Actually, her family supporting her says something really good about them and it is that they love her no matter what she’s done and that’s the kind of love we want, isn’t it? You want your parents, spouse, and/or children to love you, faults and all, right? Well her family does, and I say they’re setting an example the rest of us should follow.

And if we execute her, then we'll have done just what she did. Eye for an eye is not right. She killed, and now we're going to kill her? No, it sounds only hypocritical and self-contradicting, and we don’t want that, now do we. We have no power or place to pass judgment on someone else. As Jesus once said “Let he who is sinless cast a stone at her [the prostitute sentenced to death by stoning]!” In other words, which one of us is not guilty of something like lying, or cheating (tests, spouses, etc.), shoplifting, and even other things? Not one. You can’t honestly say “I’ve never lied” or “I’ve never done anything wrong”. So how can you say you have the right to judge someone else?!



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Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Subject: Christmas Thoughts
Time: 8:31:54 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


I've just updated my oldest and longest running blog, Christmas Thoughts. Please feel free to take a look-see. It's not that far, really easy. There's a new poem and a new insight as well as all the two year old stuff.


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Tuesday, October 9, 2007
Subject: Good vs. Evil A Unique Look at a Classic Discussion
Time: 8:15:29 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Good vs. Evil

A Unique Look at a Classic Discussion

Tuesday, October 09, 2007

By Ylanne Sorrows

 

Good versus evil. Surely, everyone has heard that phrase now; it is so common as to have become nearly cliché. Nevertheless, as a people, we have always been fascinated with the concept of good and evil. God and the Devil. Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker. America and the Terrorists. I am sure you can field several of your own examples of this concept in literature, movies, comics, and even in international politics. This classic discussion has its roots in the eve of humanity. With people, come good and evil.

I am sure many of you can recall playing Cowboys and Indians or War or Cops and Robbers, or something equally dramatic and appealing. Let me guess, the Indians were the badguys, and so were the robbers. When you were younger, did you write superhero comics? Was there an all powerful hero or heroine who was called to save the world? And no doubt, there was an equally nefarious villain, someone so evil and frightening you had nightmares. Did you ever write a fantasy story? A hero or heroine who needed to bring peace and justice to an otherwise dark and lost world? And there was an evil wizard, or an evil king, or anyone who could be called 'evil', right?

From our very conception, we have been confounded with the mystery of good and evil. Somehow, the good always wins and the evil is always punished with everlasting damnation or some sort of satisfactory punishment. Do you read the news? Do you read about terrorism? Whom in history might you name as anevil person? Might you say King Henry VIII, Adolf Hitler, Pol Pot, Osama bin Laden, Saddam Hussein, the biblical Pharaoh who ordered all Hebrew babies killed? When you think of these people, do you imagine sadistic psychopaths with hearts as black as coal? Do you label these people evil human beings?

What if someone told you otherwise? What would you say to them? Would you laugh and say "You're joking, right?" and wait for them to confirm your first reaction? Well, ladies and gentleman, I am that person. I am saying to you that none of those people, not one of the supposedly evil criminals and terrorists in the world is an evil person. And I am not joking, contrary to your first impressions. By now, perhaps you are scratching your head, looking sideways at your computer screen and saying "What?!" Or maybe you are more militant in your opposition, leaping from your chair and stabbing a finger towards the screen screaming in a hoarse voice "Liar!!! YOU'RE JUST ONE OF THEM YOU *expletive*!!!" or some variation on that concept. But nevertheless, I say to you that there is no such thing as an evil person. Likewise, there is no such thing as a good person.

Now, surely, you are beleaguered and truly wondering if I am high right now, or just plain insane. I assure you I am not. But what I say is true. You may disagree with me all you like, but nothing can change truth. You can say the Holocaust never happened, but it will not change the facts. You can believe what you say and it still cannot change the truth.

I am not saying-and never said-that there is no such thing as an evil action, or an evil thought. Genocide is evil. Hitler committed an atrocity, an evil act. He most certainly had evil thoughts in his mind, and maybe he even believed them. The Pharaoh who ordered the Hebrew babies killed most certainly committed a criminal act-what he did was evil. This in itself, however, does not make him evil. Evil actions and evil thoughts cannot make someone evil, just as a good action, such as donating a few pennies to charity, cannot make a person a good person. Why, if it did, then everyone on earth surely would be a truly good person! Of course, that statement is ridiculous, and so too is the assumption that a murder, or a lie, or a theft, or an act of cheating can make someone evil.

You might say so, or think so, but when you really think about it, it is ludicrous. Writers, when you write, do you make your 'badguys' evil, treacherous, and cruel? Maybe deformed or bad-looking? Do you make your 'goodguys' heroic, honest, and virtuous? Maybe attractive and good-looking? Stereotypes, archetypes, biases, prejudices, all of them. And you have probably read more than one book that does exactly this. Make the protagonist utterly desirable and the antagonist utterly repulsive.

Ever heard the expression "Don't judge a person until you walk a mile in their shoes?" Well it’s true-only I amend it to say “Don’t judge a person until you’ve not only walked a mile in their shoes, but worn their clothing, done their job, and loved the people they loved.” In other words, there is no way you can accurately make a judgment-or fairly, I should say-of any person until you know what their life is like. Their background, their history, their family life, their home life, their future plans. You need to know a person before you can judge them.

Hold up, before you say “But I don’t have to know Hitler to know he’s evil!” or something to that effect, remember what I told you before. There is no such thing as a truly evil person. The only evil entity is the Devil or Satan if you will. And likewise, the only good entity is God, Allah, Elohim, Jehovah, or whatever you want to call Him. The only reason people have evil thoughts and do evil actions is because of Satan.

Now if you believed that because a man commits murder, he is an evil person, then think of all the times you tell little lies to get out of an assignment, or white lies to avoid confrontation, or to protect your friends. Think of all the times you have ever cheated on anything, or shoplifted anything. Those are bad, or evil, actions. So does doing them automatically turn you into an evil person? If you believe that murder makes the murderer an evil person, then yes. Obviously, this cannot be the case. It is not different. Murder is not more serious than lying. Both are bad, both are evil, and both are sins. Both are inherently evil actions that cannot possibly be good. But does doing make you a bad person?

Imagine Hitler, for a moment, if you will. Hitler killed over six million Jews, Gypsies, homosexuals, mentally ill people, and disabled people, as well as political opponents during his tenure as Die Fuhrer. Of course, these were very evil actions. Imagine for a moment, that you are Hitler and you are still alive. Do you feel sorry for what you have done? Maybe Hitler did, and maybe he did not. Most if not all of you probably believe that there is no way in heaven or hell that Hitler was remorseful, and you are probably right. Do you think it is because Hitler is an evil person? I say that maybe Hitler felt he was doing the right thing. Did you ever think of that? Maybe Hitler did not see his acts as evil. Most of us if not all of us, do. But maybe he did not.

We are intrinsically inclined towards doing evil actions. It is human nature, as it has been ever since Eve betook of that piece of fruit-which we do not actually know was an apple, contrary to popular belief. We were created to be good people, without blemish and perfect, living in harmony with our creator. But we spoiled things, as we often do. (Think of the ideal of Communism, or of having the greenhouse effect, which is turning into Global warming) We have a peculiar talent for killing each other and ruining good things. And so we are no longer good people, but we are also not evil people.

I am a person just as you are. I have made mistakes and I have my own downfalls and weaknesses. I do not claim to be wholly innocent. But I do believe in truth, and that is all that I present here. So good versus evil turns into person versus person.



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Wednesday, October 3, 2007
Subject: Ha ha ha ha another excerpt from Faith, Hope and Love
Time: 2:27:05 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Prologue, from Faith, Hope, and Love by <?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" />Ylanne Sorrows(The Fourth Novel, ha, ha) © October 03, 2007    <?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />

 

            “This country, ever since it was founded in 1776, has suffered from an affliction that has steadily augmented itself, and latched onto our society, government, and politics, and grown so that we are crippled as long as it lasts. This insidious treachery is exactly that, ladies and gentlemen. There are those who seek to profane our precious fatherland, even in our finest moments, straight down to our most publicized embarrassments. These people are foreign nationals, and natural-born citizens alike. These people are traitors, guilty of treason, espionage, and who knows not what. And it is our sacred duty, our solemn charge, to bring to an immediate halt these illegal and demeaning actions.

 

            “I call upon you to bring together the varying branches of America’s government to synergize, and to collectively locate these weak links in the chain of command, and to neutralize them, effectively and immediately. Gentlemen, this is not a threat which can be fully eradicated unless each and every one of us is completely dedicated to the task at hand. This treachery must be removed at the very root-at its infidel source. For if we do not incapacitate this menace at the source, it will only regenerate itself, and serve to demolish our proud nation further. Venerate your country, honor your fatherland, and join with me in our new credo-we will eliminate these traitors, poisonousfruits, so that our homeland can once again be the land of the free, and the home of the brave.”

 

            Robert Edwards looked around the room with his daunting gaze, and not one of the men and women in the room could hold it. Each one of them dropped their eyes as he made his way around the room with his eyes. Though only five feet tall exactly, Edwards was as intimidating man.

 

            “Mr. Edwards, do you really believe,” Kelsy O’Donnell, the director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation, began.  “that even now, the risk of some small number of infiltrators actually poses that much of a threat to this country?”

 

            “Ms. O’Donnell, I am not finished.” Edwards said without deigning to cast his gaze in the director’s direction. He cleared his throat and resumed his speech. “These traitors, it has been discovered, are located in every branch and sect of our government. Not one federal or even state level agency is fully free of this poisonous web of treachery. Personnel as high-up as the White House staff have been suspected of illegitimate activities. Before any one agency is able to clearly eradicate the threat across the country, it must first remove any threat within itself. Clearly, this is a nearly impossible task that we are called on to execute, but we have our calling.

 

            “Therefore, gentlemen, it is my honor to propose to you the Five-Step Plan, which I have devised over the past few months. First, the leader of each agency must verify among a small group of individuals from their respective agencies true loyalty. Then each member of the small group will work to identify individuals who are a threat to our nation. Third, these individuals must be carefully monitored by people whom we know we can trust, and if possible, even fed false information. Fourth, lists of these individual’s addresses must be compiled in some secret database. And lastly, on one day, when each and every traitorous link has been identified, trusted personnel must move in quickly and arrest each one of them immediately on a pre-specified day.”

 

            The room was silent for a minute. Finally, each attendee at the meeting nodded, some slowly, some enthusiastically.

 

            “The President himself has already approved of this plan. Shall we now go about, and begin to enact it?”

           

            Everyone stood up, some more quickly than others, and each shook Edward’s hand before leaving the room. “Don’t forget, we have another meeting next Thursday!” Edwards called after them. Senator Anneliese Rainer, President pro tempore of the United States Senate, smiled and walked out of the room.



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Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Subject: Just saying..
Time: 8:50:13 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Well it's nothing personal, don't take it that way, but if you happen to be reading this, well, do you happen you know to ever post comments? If you have an AIM screen name, all you have to do is sign in at the top right hand corner of the page to post. Or you can click where it says 'add comment' or 'post comment' or something like that beneath each entry. Otherwise I have no way of ever knowing if or who is reading my blog. Just saying...


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Friday, September 14, 2007
Subject: Explanation
Time: 1:05:21 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


I believe that four entries down on this page, or if this has been archived because it's an OLD entry, four entries before this one, there is an essay entitled "A Single Voice Crying Out in the Wilderness". I wrote that essay out of boredom, and while away at summer camp. The computer I was using, a Mac incidentally, had a file permission error and I was unable to save the file to my flashdrive, so in panic, I posted it to my blog. That's why it's there and also Im too lazy to bother removing it. After all, I wrote it and this IS a writing blog. Not that anyone actually reads it, though.

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Wednesday, September 12, 2007
Subject: Hi
Time: 7:58:28 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Hi. I am the author of the blog which you are reading-that is, if you are reading these words. Not that anyone reads this blog or anything and certainly not that anyone actually comments on any entries or anything, but, well, if I haven't introduced myself before, allow me to do so now. My two main pseudonyms are Lea Stone and Ylanne Sorrows, and as an internet alias I chose the name of Treali Storm, who if you have read any part of this blog, you are probably somewhat familiar with at least as a character. Treali started out as an alternate identity for me, like me in a new improved self. But then she morphed into two people-me and the character, who is nothing like me-I swear! Well, then again... Um where were we? Oh yes. We were discussing how no one ever reads this blog except me and well I guess you.

Please read this blog. Read my writing excerpts. I want to get published so badly, and I want to have a chance so much!


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Tuesday, August 7, 2007
Subject: Testing testing
Time: 12:37:50 PM EDT
Author:  trealistorm


Click me!

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